Monday, November 8, 2010

DRAFT!

When finding the right person to be with, most people wouldn’t just want to be with any random person. People tend to search for someone that would match what they look or who interests them. Finding someone who doesn’t try to commit in their relationship or having to slack and doesn’t care to do anything to show how much they care, they will find themselves unhappy. Being In a relationship both partners have to try their best in order to make their relationship work.
Many people find it difficult being in a long distance relationship because of how far away they are and knowing if they can trust them. Most people would rather see their love ones daily instead of once in a long while, but having a positive attitude being in a long distance relationship can work out. Being away from a love one both must trust each other and make the time to see one another. Making the effort to see your love ones it would excite the partner and make them happier.
Planning romantic events improves the happiness in a relationship. It’s boring having to do the same thing over and over especially in a relationship, experiencing something new can always be exciting and enjoyable. If not having to do anything exciting together then the relationship is dull and you and your partners will not be as happy as you should be. Having to plan a nice event for your partner, not only they will feel happy but it would also make yourself feel satisfied and happy seeing them pleased.
In order to love someone, one must first accept them for who they are and not having to complain about what they lack of, doing so both couples will be unhappy. Most couples complain about how one should improve themselves to change into how they want them to be, mostly being able to change a person they would always end up asking for more changes.

1 comment:

  1. Dear Vivian,

    I think that your ideas about relationships are good. I wasn't to sure of what your thesis is, I think you should work on developing a strong and clear thesis. Also when developing your essay please try and make your concepts and ideas as clear and understanble as possible for your reader. I found alot of errors with run on sentences in you draft, work on developing a stronger sentence structure. Overall I think your essay has the ability to be great. You just need to focus on developing a strong thesis, clear sentence structure, and grammer. Good luck to you on your English 101 journey!!!!

    Sincerly,
    Jessica Bryant

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